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Grade my IELTS essay, assigning whole number scores for Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource, and Grammar. Offer precise feedback and tips for improvement according to IELTS standards. Pinpoint and correct grammar and vocabulary mistakes, with advice for elevating the essay's score. Include actionable steps for enhancement. Paste your essay below.

Revise this essay by correcting all lexical and grammatical mistakes, enhancing task response, coherence, and cohesion to fully meet the task's requirements. Upgrade it according to the IELTS assessment criteria. Provide an explanation for each revision and assess the final version, giving an estimated IELTS score for each criterion with a detailed explanation. Please submit the essay for evaluation.

Please upload the essay you'd like evaluated. Aim for a concise critique focusing on grammar and vocabulary, offering clear suggestions for enhancement to achieve a higher score. Avoid extraneous information.

Enhance my essay to achieve a band 9.0 by: Fixing lexical and grammatical errors. Ensuring it addresses all task requirements. Improving flow, coherence, and structure. Enriching vocabulary for sophistication. Using varied sentence structures accurately. Integrating cohesive devices smoothly. I'll provide a detailed revision summary and a new band score. Please submit your essay for revision.